Chapter-14 "The Final Chapter"
Mishthi died the very next day of blood cancer.She kept taking Jatin's name towards the end of her journey.She kept saying to Ankita,Sunidhi and some of her friends who were still in contact with her..
"call Jatin,tell him that I love him.May be he did not read the letters I gave him.Call him please.I want to see him one last time."
She closed her eyes saying this and her last wish of meeting Jatin remained unfulfilled.
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Love is the most beautifull gift that God has given to human beings.
But there are two things that are very important in love.
One,realizing that it is love.
Two,saying it.
Mishthi never realized that she loved Jatin if she would have then she would have died happily.Three years,in those three years she would have lived her entire life and then she wouldnt have had any complains.
Or if Jatin could have said to Mishthi that he loves her.Again the story could have been different.
The greats pleasure in life comes when you get what you want and for that one has to make some efforts.
If you love someone,say it.Because you never know,you might not get another chance of saying it.Atmost your love will reject you..atleast you did your part rest is upto God.
I wrote this story not just for fun or passing my time.I have been seeing my friends and others as well loving someone dearly but hesitating to say it.I wrote this for them.
I dont know whether I managed to change there perception and lived upto all your expectations (if there were any) but this was something I thought of sharing so I did.
Thanxx to everyone who beared me and gave their precious time to my blog.
Those who didnt....no comments.
Anyways this was the end to my story so all you folks in love....."sAy iT...wHeN u Love iT.."..
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ok ok!!!!!!!!! now i came to know why d two main n sweet characters of d story have been killed so rudely by d author.....coz he actually wants to circulate a msg among his friends...good job!
ReplyDeleteanyways as a whole d story was good.however to b very frank d first half was quite boring but story caught it's real interest from d second half.The termination of d story was fantastic.
this was all my views about d story.now let us move on to the author.
"say it when u love it" clearly proves d wonderful narrating capabilities which were hidden in u.i can't say about others but as per my opinion u have became successful in picturising d entire story in front of my eyes.however many things in d story were too filmy n irritating for eg; there was no need to rape mishti,n u can use any another word instead of "phattu" of 'jane tu ya jane na'.anyways being ur first novel/story it can b ignored.
anyways.......going good.plzzzzzzzzzz do write further WITH MORE IMPROVEMENTS.i'll b waiting 4 ur next creation.
"COME BACK WITH A NEW CONCEPT SOON COZ SOMEONE IS WAITING HERE"KEEP GOINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG................
"ALL THE BEST 4 A NEW JOURNEY"
thanxxx a lot for the comments brother...!!
ReplyDeleteand yup will surely try to improve,just need friends like you.
And as far as my next story goes....i have many things in mind...its amorphous right now..but keep waiting..thanx again...!!
finished...!!!
ReplyDeletethats GOOD....
it was getting to be a drag....
anyways u saved the best for the last...
the last post was really good where u explained the reason for writing this story...
i sincerely do hope that "some" ppl realise soon enough...
but hen again, if realising love was so easy...it wudn't have bee called "LOVE"..!!!
and yes, professing one's love for another takes guts n balls dude..to do that u need to believe, trust and above all respect...
great job dude...keep it going with some other kind of stuff..good luck...
cheers...
yahoo yahoooo...!!!
kunal u did a gr8 Job...!!
ReplyDeletei got abacked after reading ur last blog..as nor jatin nor Mishthi ever met after realzing thr Love..!!
But U conveyed a very Good message thru dis n i appreciate U for this Sweet n Paining Story..!!
N all d best 4 ur Next Story...plz iss baar mila dena dono ko...!!
hey...gr88 job done yaar...!!!
ReplyDeleteur whole story was very gud...though it was a mixture of some bollywood movies but still a gud try..atleast through this story everybody came 2 knw abt ur hidden talent..very well narrated...i dint xpected dis end but still was very nice n ofcourse a good message at d end...
eagerly waiting for ur nxt story to come...all d bst...have a gr88 day..!!
hey bro..... no new posts yet ?????????????? if ur new story is not ready then till then u may continue ur daily blogging...........yahoo..........
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